Today

turrinbarturrin · Subject: Today Wed Apr 29, 2009 5:34 pm

On Days Like today I miss you
Its pouring rain and no one came
So I will wait
alone even when the birds have gone
I am past the gates
Few remain but hold fast
Know the season will always change

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“No. I am not ashamed of Him, and I will not have Him be
ashamed of me. I will not go. And if you force me, I shall return.”

Kairi Cypmann · Subject: Re: Today Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:53 pm

I like this a lot. I'm not sure if you meant it to, but it has a religious undertone to me that I like.

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I am because I need to be.

Kairi the Claymore

turrinbarturrin · Subject: Re: Today Thu Apr 30, 2009 10:58 am

thanks
Everything I do has a religious over under tone lol XD

@ty make yo own poemy thread dis one mine I saved yers just case yer didnt pm me if ya needs it.

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“No. I am not ashamed of Him, and I will not have Him be
ashamed of me. I will not go. And if you force me, I shall return.”

Anndra Kenzie · Subject: Re: Today Mon May 04, 2009 2:13 pm

I really like this poem. You are a good writer.

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The lightning was my strength,
The thunder was my voice.
And the storm was my song.