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turrinbarturrin
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PostSubject: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeFri Aug 22, 2008 9:49 pm

From a grave
From a prosaic life
I have been awakened
But to truly live one must die
Within my metamorphosis
Came a certain sickness
My flesh screamed
The old cried out in a load and Tenacious voice
Trying to swallow me back down
In spite of my choice
With belligerent dastard movements
So capricious yet to be noticed
Despite my apparent weakness
An infinitely perspicacious being has given me strength
Such strength that even when it kills me
When I tire and my spirit lacks
At times when my bones break and crack
That I can move on
Death always circles
The sight makes my nerves fail
My every attempt to fight it seems frail
All attacks made by me fall short
My own weapons are too weak
To yet again siege the fort
I’m out of arrows and I can’t stand
A knife is all that remains in my hand
But I cannot quit
I must fight on
Even if all I do is spit
With ribs split
Ever rising and falling heavy to the ground
Standing yet again to scream my challenge
My efforts without aid
Only when His words I speak
Are all my weapons made whole
Different this time sharp not dull
My teeth are a wall holding back a host of words
Words you have yet to have ears to hear
For they cause in great fear
His words are the reason I fight
Rest and light
Pulled me back from death and a black plight
I’m here to give to gift you with His blood
I siege because I love
Breaking is just a part
Healing is what I wanted for you from the start
So kill me
Walk away
But I’ll be back
Though I tire
I’ll always attack
Through your mire and mud
I pray my blade shows you his blood.


Just kinda who I am
lemme know if you see errors
Edit: calling this final I did change the title from Even when it kills me though


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Tyr

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PostSubject: Re: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeThu Aug 28, 2008 1:39 pm

so out of curiousity does this make you and undead?
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turrinbarturrin
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PostSubject: Re: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeFri Aug 29, 2008 9:14 pm

nope
Its spiritual symbolism and its what has truly happened in my life believe it or not J
Plus in my back story i get to have fun out of body experiences and soul merges
So I'm more alive than the living and yet more dead to the world than those who live in it for my body is mere vessel of my spirit which transcends and surpasses death itself.
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PostSubject: Re: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeSat Aug 30, 2008 5:12 am

yeap, that's a shaman alright. They live in both worlds, which often makes then disoriented in this one and very weird and awesome. Totally epic.
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Elysia Faal

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PostSubject: Re: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeSat Aug 30, 2008 7:13 am

You could talk in epic riddles like an oracle!....Except, you know, minus the drugs. =3
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PostSubject: Re: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeFri Sep 19, 2008 12:50 am

he is crazy enough without the drugs, Id be scared to see him on them...:/
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turrinbarturrin
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PostSubject: Re: Laid to Rest   Laid to Rest Icon_minitimeFri Sep 19, 2008 1:08 am

lol me to
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