Posts : 732 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 33 Location : bs prov
Subject: Laid to Rest Fri Aug 22, 2008 9:49 pm
From a grave From a prosaic life I have been awakened But to truly live one must die Within my metamorphosis Came a certain sickness My flesh screamed The old cried out in a load and Tenacious voice Trying to swallow me back down In spite of my choice With belligerent dastard movements So capricious yet to be noticed Despite my apparent weakness An infinitely perspicacious being has given me strength Such strength that even when it kills me When I tire and my spirit lacks At times when my bones break and crack That I can move on Death always circles The sight makes my nerves fail My every attempt to fight it seems frail All attacks made by me fall short My own weapons are too weak To yet again siege the fort I’m out of arrows and I can’t stand A knife is all that remains in my hand But I cannot quit I must fight on Even if all I do is spit With ribs split Ever rising and falling heavy to the ground Standing yet again to scream my challenge My efforts without aid Only when His words I speak Are all my weapons made whole Different this time sharp not dull My teeth are a wall holding back a host of words Words you have yet to have ears to hear For they cause in great fear His words are the reason I fight Rest and light Pulled me back from death and a black plight I’m here to give to gift you with His blood I siege because I love Breaking is just a part Healing is what I wanted for you from the start So kill me Walk away But I’ll be back Though I tire I’ll always attack Through your mire and mud I pray my blade shows you his blood.
Just kinda who I am lemme know if you see errors Edit: calling this final I did change the title from Even when it kills me though
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Tyr
Posts : 712 Join date : 2008-08-18 Age : 34 Location : The Night
Subject: Re: Laid to Rest Thu Aug 28, 2008 1:39 pm
so out of curiousity does this make you and undead?
turrinbarturrin Field Marshal
Posts : 732 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 33 Location : bs prov
Subject: Re: Laid to Rest Fri Aug 29, 2008 9:14 pm
nope Its spiritual symbolism and its what has truly happened in my life believe it or not J Plus in my back story i get to have fun out of body experiences and soul merges So I'm more alive than the living and yet more dead to the world than those who live in it for my body is mere vessel of my spirit which transcends and surpasses death itself.
Vala Forum Administrator
Posts : 291 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 34 Location : Blue Springs Province
Subject: Re: Laid to Rest Sat Aug 30, 2008 5:12 am
yeap, that's a shaman alright. They live in both worlds, which often makes then disoriented in this one and very weird and awesome. Totally epic.
Elysia Faal
Posts : 163 Join date : 2008-08-20 Age : 34 Location : Blue Springs Province
Subject: Re: Laid to Rest Sat Aug 30, 2008 7:13 am
You could talk in epic riddles like an oracle!....Except, you know, minus the drugs. =3
Madea
Posts : 69 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 34 Location : Blue Springs province of Haven
Subject: Re: Laid to Rest Fri Sep 19, 2008 12:50 am
he is crazy enough without the drugs, Id be scared to see him on them...:/
turrinbarturrin Field Marshal
Posts : 732 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 33 Location : bs prov
Subject: Re: Laid to Rest Fri Sep 19, 2008 1:08 am