turrinbarturrin Field Marshal
Posts : 732 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 33 Location : bs prov
| Subject: Today Thu Apr 30, 2009 2:34 am | |
| On Days Like today I miss you Its pouring rain and no one came So I will wait alone even when the birds have gone I am past the gates Few remain but hold fast Know the season will always change | |
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Kairi Cypmann
Posts : 893 Join date : 2008-08-19 Location : Rolla, MO
| Subject: Re: Today Thu Apr 30, 2009 3:53 am | |
| I like this a lot. I'm not sure if you meant it to, but it has a religious undertone to me that I like. | |
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turrinbarturrin Field Marshal
Posts : 732 Join date : 2008-08-15 Age : 33 Location : bs prov
| Subject: Re: Today Thu Apr 30, 2009 7:58 pm | |
| thanks Everything I do has a religious over under tone lol XD
@ty make yo own poemy thread dis one mine I saved yers just case yer didnt pm me if ya needs it. | |
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Anndra Kenzie
Posts : 34 Join date : 2008-08-16 Age : 30 Location : Independence
| Subject: Re: Today Mon May 04, 2009 11:13 pm | |
| I really like this poem. You are a good writer. | |
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