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turrinbarturrin
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PostSubject: Mother   Mother Icon_minitimeFri Aug 29, 2008 8:52 pm
The Mother cries
Her children sleep
The Mother weeps
Her children sleep
The mother screams
Her children burn
The wheels of war rape and turn
Quiet goes the mother
The door to dead winter is open
Frozen is the heart of mortals
Thus Gods tools move to slow and to few
The time of retribution is near
Hear the long silenced cries of the mother
Take up her scream and fight
Make her new song again
May she sing
Lest all burn
For in fire comes death
But death in turn becomes life
Turrinbarturrin
Master of doom not by doom mastered
If death must be
Than bring it forth
Weep for they do not hear
Than cut them down with blade and spear
For rebirth may quiet mother howl
That she may sing of life again




Tell me what you think and if you see any errors
wrote it based on concepts so far for The secret order of forest saints and seers
hope ya likes it Very Happy
Edit- I'm calling this the final thanks for advice and insp


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PostSubject: Re: Mother   Mother Icon_minitimeSat Aug 30, 2008 5:13 am
that's amazing. I really like it.
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PostSubject: Re: Mother   Mother Icon_minitimeSat Aug 30, 2008 2:27 pm
Turrinbarturrin wrote:

For in fire comes death
But in death, life in turn

hope ya likes it Very Happy
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PostSubject: Re: Mother   Mother Icon_minitimeSat Aug 30, 2008 2:40 pm
changed that line a smidge thank you!
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PostSubject: Re: Mother   Mother Icon_minitimeFri Sep 05, 2008 8:11 pm
I like it alot. It is very Gaea-esque. I <3 it :3
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